View Full Version : I remember


Jasper
5-08-01, 03:21 PM
I wrote this a while ago, when I was in a phase of my life where I needed to expunge some lingering feelings, hope it isnt too dismal.

I remember:
I remember the first day I saw you
I remember the way your long hair caught my eye
I remember the smile you flashed when I said hello
I remember my heart skipping when I saw it

I remember all my friends saying you were out of my league
I remember ignoring them
I remember my palms sweating when I asked you out
I remember trying to act cool when you said yes

I remember the first kiss we shared and how it made me weak
I remember walking home that day, feeling a warmth inside
I remember not being able to sleep, thinking of you until the sun peeked through my window
I remember thinking I was not good enough for you
I remember you assuring me I was

I remember the day you told me you wanted to leave, that where we were wasnt where you wanted to be
I remember deciding to leave all I had, and join the navy to allow that to happen

I remember being told things weren't as they seemed
I remember thinking they couldnt be right
I remember you telling me again, how much I meant to you

I remember shopping for the ring
I remember feeling so nervous when I gave it to you
I remember the incredible joy I felt when you said yes
I remember the terrible sadness when you later gave it back

I remember you saying you needed more time
I remember sleepless nights, worrying about you
I remember when I didnt eat for 12 days, I was too blue to bother
I remember the relief when you said we could work things out

I remember going to your prom
I remember making love to you
I remember how right it felt to be with you once again

I remember going to war
I remember waiting for a letter
I remember it never coming
I remember crying a lot
I remember not hearing from you for 9 months

I remember when you called me and we talked for hours
I remember you telling me how much you missed me, how much you loved me, how much I meant to you
I remember the plans we made that night
I remember the next call, telling me you were getting married
I remember crying
and crying

I remember wondering why I wasn't good enough
I remember wondering why you called and made me think of you again
I remember the lonliness of being without you

I remember talking to friends, they all told me how sorry they were
I remember feeling like a fool

I remember how songs would make me cry
I remember my friends telling me things would be okay
I remember not believing them

I remember MY wedding day
I remember thinking of you
I remember crying that night, by myself, feeling lonely and ashamed of myself

I remember trying to find you when things were not working out
I remember thinking I would be able to win you back
I remember not trying for fear of feeling blue again

I remember the day it occurred to me that you were the reason I wasnt happy
I remember the day I realised how foolish I had been
I remember thinking it was so easy to forget

But I still feel sad when I remember
But I feel sad for you, not myself
Memories and good times are there now
Hurt is slowly fading
Happiness is returning
I miss you
But I no longer need you




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Ron
While I am aware that, as the saying goes, Money can't buy me happiness"
I would still like to be known as "That meloncholy guy driving the red Lamborghini"

Email me if you want: realdealmbp@yahoo.com

Silveradocruiser
5-08-01, 04:06 PM
http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//crying.gif Man, that was beautiful!

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morningmyst
5-08-01, 04:12 PM
Oh, my......I"m crying! That was wonderful! http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//crying.gif

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cultleader
5-08-01, 05:33 PM
Damn,that hits home like a F**kin' sledgehammer.

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Iluvthe80s
5-08-01, 07:52 PM
Wow! That one just made me cry.http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//crying.gif

Blaziegirl
5-08-01, 08:01 PM
That was great! Have you given any thought to publishing it Jasper? http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//smile.gif

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War doesn't determine who is right, war determines who is left.

morningmyst
5-10-01, 01:13 PM
No kidding, huh? That was really really really really really really good!

djdaffy1227
5-10-01, 01:32 PM
Cue the applause *clap, clap, clap*
Really, that was very good.

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Jasper
5-10-01, 04:44 PM
Well thank you all for the feedback. I thought that was just something that I would personally benifit from writing. I saw everybody else putting up things that they have written. So, I just thought I would throw it out there, and see what people thought. It was sorta theraputic for me to put some of my feelings down, and see how it read. Glad somebody liked it!

Urethane
5-10-01, 10:46 PM
Originally posted by cultleader
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<STRONG>Damn,that hits home like a F**kin' sledgehammer.

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I think we all have experienced this kind of pain, it sure brought back some memories of my past. That was pure flowing elegance!

Brent