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pamela*
3-19-02, 02:37 PM
Just wondering, how many of you are into Vampires.. I wouldn't really say that I am.. but I have a lot of poems, no, not written by me.. but by the guy who used to send them to me.. that I REALLY like regardless of the content.. I just like the way he writes.. I would post them.. but wouldn't want to offend anyone ... here's one of his short ones.. hopefully it isn't too offensive..and sensual for the public forums.. it's one of my favorites..

BloödPoem III: DARKEST OF KISSES by NewWörldVåmpyré

July 1999 (REVISED 01/14/2000/Fri/9:07 PM EST)

Please tell me your name…
Please don't be afraid
You smile and deny it,
But I sense it
I can almost read your thoughts
There are other languages
a person can speak besides words
The way a lady moves says so much
Right now your body is singing to me
The shaking of your hand as I hold it now
The bead of sweat making its journey down your face
Breathing that becomes deeper and slower…
Do you understand?
I think you do.

What is it saying now?
You're scared, as well as aroused
But now…I touch you there
Don't speak
Let me read you again.
The way your eyes are closed now
The tension in your body building
Breathing becoming ever faster…
Yes, I read you clearly now

Feel the heat of my breath against your neck
as I speak my words?
Words and touch in the right combination
magically overwhelm & paralyze even the most defiant
I tease you
No..I tease myself
I savor the moment
As my teeth glide over your white skin
As talons move up your back and through your dark hair
I'm a demon trying in vain not to hurt this
captured Angel in the palm of its hand
You no longer have the will or desire to resist
Your body invites me…I graciously accept
You recoil, succumb, and die
from the Darkest of Kisses ..

I have about 12 more of his poems... if anyone's interested

sassy
3-19-02, 03:05 PM
:devil: Wow... freaked me out a little there.
I love reading books on vampires but I dont' like it enough to write about them.

It was good though.. if you are into that sorta thing.

80sSmurf
3-19-02, 05:46 PM
Saw it in DC, still think it has a good flow to it.
Well written :)

Jazzmyn
3-20-02, 03:00 AM
That poem was great!!! Loved it. :) I love :vampires: if you haven't figured out by now. lol Smething so erotic about them. :devil:

pamela*
3-23-02, 06:39 PM
Jazzy, I have the other poems if you're interested in reading them.. I could zip them into one file for ya

Jazzmyn
3-24-02, 03:44 AM
That would be great Pamela!!! Would love to read them. :)

Trixter
3-24-02, 04:24 AM
Great piece! I was really fascinated with vampires and the attractive nature of it all! in late '89 and early '90 I would dress all in black, mistaken for a gothie all the time, but I read and watched everything I could. Even today, my interest still lies in the vampire folklore! :thumb:

Roemello
3-25-02, 12:52 AM
I wouldn't say I'm really, really into them, but I do find vampires to be quite interesting...always had a slight allure (being something of a creature of the night myself :lol: ). One of Livesay's tunes is about vampires too if ya didn't catch it (Darkest Hour) :)

Anyway, cool poem :cool::vampire::D