Here's another song I wrote for Jessy. It's really messed up hehehe. I'm trying out a new style of writing.

THE END OF THE BEGINNING
by Amy S.

It's the middle of the night
You wake up in a cold sweat
Trembling with fright
In the darkness you feel a threat

Creatures of the dark
Lurking in the shadows
You can hide all you want
They will get your soul

chorus:
You can not see but you feel
Believe me this is real
The beast is out to kill
And you know that he will
So hide underneath your covers
Scream at the top of your lungs
And when it's all over
The life you know will be gone

You know there is no escape
But you are driven by fear
Running away from your fate
Because you know the end is near

CHORUS

CHORUS

{spoken}
I see the demons in the shadows
They are here to come for me
To corrupt my soul
They are here finally
-fade out-

I have a few comments about it but I want to hear what you guys think about it first.

Very cool.It's exactly the kind of tune I used to write for my last band(the band was DEADMEAT)

Thanks Culty. When I started writing it I was thinking of something like Iron Maiden's Fear of the Dark. But it turned out into more: a person giving into the dark side! It's probably going to be a death metal song exept for the last part. I'm thinking maybe a young kid's voice.