Your breath upon my neck
sends chills down my spine.
I dream of us,
our bodies entertwined.
As passion overtakes,
there is no mistake,
I am yours and you are mine.

Why "stab"?

It takes a lot to be creative...and a way lot more to share such personal lyrics with others.

And this short poem carried a lot of intimate emotions - I´m not sure that I could express myself in this way.

Thanks for sharing such moments.

Yeah I agree very good Myst :)

As I said before I wish I could put my thoughts into words. I know what I want to write, but it gets lost somewhere from my brain to my hand. I tried to write a story once, that was a mistake....... :(

With writing poetry, ya just gotta let it flow :) When I write, I don't think at all...it's pure emotion all in one breath :)

Anywho, very nice Myst ;)

Wow...that was powerful Myst! I think I need a cigarette! LOL (good thing I don't smoke!)

Originally posted by Roemello:
<STRONG>With writing poetry, ya just gotta let it flow :) When I write, I don't think at all...it's pure emotion all in one breath :)
</STRONG>

Maybe that is my problem.....I try to hard :confused:

Beautyful!! :)

Originally posted by Not Man:
<STRONG>Maybe that is my problem.....I try to hard :confused:</STRONG>


Don't try at all Not. It sometimes takes me weeks to write a lyric, and sometimes it'll spew out in 10 minutes. It has to flow from you. If you force it, it sounds forced. The inspiration has to hit, and then it comes.

Notman try writing daily. I sit down everymorning do 3 pages of free writing. Some days I just write have to write this crap have to write this crap over and over and then suddenly the pen links to my heart and something takes over. If there is a story in you and you're trying to tell it - you have a very creative side you just need to tweak it. :) I look at my writing from age 17 onward and each year gets better. Stay true :)

Thanks for the tips Pagan and Zel :) I will try your suggestions, but I can't make any guarantees.

Myst, that is very beautiful. And, while Pagan hinted at it, I am going to come right out and sayit: it was also very sexy!! And since I don't smoke anymore, I will share my candy cigarettes with Pagan.

Really good, Mystie!