View Full Version : He Said I Was Like the Zodiac


AstroGirl
4-30-01, 07:33 PM
(another poem for you guys to read)

He said I was like the Zodiac.
Pure, beautiful, perfect.

He said he could look at the sky
and he could see me looking back.

The moon, he said, could never outshine,
could never compete with my eyes.
The cool blue dusk, the evening's caress,
could never hold up to my touch.

He said I was like the lion,
intimidating and strong.
He said I was like the virgin,
innocent and sweet.
He said I was like the hunter,
experienced and smart.
He said I was like the scales,
thoughtful and just.

He said film could never capture
the beauty and liveliness I possess.
When he asked me to stay forever,
my tears to him said yes.

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AstroGirl
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...In Xanadu did Kubla Khan a stately pleasure dome decree, where Alph the sacred river ran through caverns measureless to man, down to a sunless sea...

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Pagan
4-30-01, 08:15 PM
Nice work Astro....

Amy Livin
5-02-01, 12:31 AM
Aaaaaawwwwwww........I always love those kind of poems with endings like that. It's cute!

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ValJ
5-02-01, 01:11 AM
That was really lovely. I thought you had just copied it down for us to read, but am I to understand that you wrote it? That just makes it even more beautiful. Keep at it, and soon you shall be famous!!!

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Yeah. And then you woke up!

AstroGirl
5-03-01, 07:11 PM
Thanks to all! Yeah, I wrote it like the night before I posted it. I have a couple more that I'm going to post soon. Thanks again you guys. Hardly anyone has read my poem (and replied) because of the freak file taking up the spotlight. http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//smile.gif

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AstroGirl
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...In Xanadu did Kubla Khan a stately pleasure dome decree, where Alph the sacred river ran through caverns measureless to man, down to a sunless sea...

Silveradocruiser
5-03-01, 07:20 PM
Whoah! That's really good!http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//smile.gif By all means, post more!!!

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H@ns (OK, so I AM the bad guy from Die Hard!)

Amy Livin
5-03-01, 07:28 PM
More More we want MORE!!!!!

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