I was writing lyrics for a song for Jessy (he can only write music) and this is what came out. It's not done but I think it's good.

Man seeks shelter in the abyss of his mind
Held in ignorance and bliss
Crushed by the answer they seek to find
Realizing their life is a miss
Held by fear and respect for the Master
Fooling themselves thinking he is the Creator

We try to move mountains with words
Although we are nothing but worms
We try to move mountains with words
Even though we are worms

The soil of incompetance
Is incrusted beneath our nails
From digging a hole of hopelessness
When everything we do fails
We try to do good but only evil prevails
Humanity falling into a pit of thorns and nails

We try to move mountains with words
Although we are nothing but worms
We try to move mountains with words
Even though we are worms

So what do you guys think?

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Amy Livin

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Oh...I love that first verse! Sounds like something I'd write! http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//biggrin.gif Very cool Amy! http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//wink.gif

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Loved it Amy!

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~Dawn

Thanks guys, glad you liked it. I read it to Jessy and he made me his official songwritter http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//smile.gif Me so happy, we have a buisness relationship! http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//OFFWALL.gif

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Keep The Faith, These Days And Always ;)
Amy Livin

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Excellent work Amy! http://www.80sxchange.com/ubb/smilies//biggrin.gif What kind of music is he writing? In the future if he's trying to sell songs, try to stay away from the "angst" thing. Labels are shying away from that.